Wow. That, in my opinion, was very much in characters, if all the characters were a shade darker. I like this characterization a lot.
Oooh ... nicely done boys!
hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love seeing Snape under someone elses control!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really hot. i really liked it. definetely needs to be more like this
i like it. lol soz im not very u no helpful.
Oh I like this! Bad James is sexy! Write more, I adore James/Sirius. ^^
WONDERFUL
Not too sure i liked this. The writing was good, and everything waslovely, but i dont like the idea of a bad James. Bad sirius and bad Snape i love, but james just doent do bad, for me!
LOVE IT!! More!! XD Love all of your writings! Keep up the great work.
cruel James, cruel Sirius, poor Sevy. Scarred for life!
Hehe... good ending. I really enjoyed that. It was hot and intense with just pure... well, school boy hatred. I mean, James and Sirius obviously hate Severus and the fact that they all stayed in character (somewhat...I guess. But it worked...) and still fucked was awesome. Thanks for that read. GREAT JOB!