I really enjoyed your story, such a rare pairing, but with a lot of potential. I see you have led by example. :) Well done!
Gods you can make a girl cry. Have you tried your hand at an AU...one where they both make it out alive?
I can't believe NO ONE has reviewed this! While I was a bit squicked, at first, by the idea of Severus and Albus together, you did a fabulous job with it. Poor, tormented Severus...sigh...Nicely done.