I thought this was brilliant. With each paragraph leading up to the lie in the final line and each one to a different person. Really well thought out, 5 stars :)
i dont really understand the title, its a misleading title. id have thought the story would have some corrilation to it. not a bad story, but it didnt have anything in it really. though you did do a good job with the peter part. i was impressed with that.
Your style was great, as was the concept of the story. You don't ramble on, it is sharp and dry. With the title, it really is creepy, you get a glimps of an abbyss, but do not quite see it. The most important things in this story are not the ones said, but the ones left unspoken. So, all in all, it is a simply awesome story!!! Yours, Meta
Oh, that was wonderful. Truly wonderful. I wove in and out of canon with your story and it was a fabulous ride!
that was probably the best thing i've read in awhile..... it didn't stray too far from the canon, but it was its own story...very good
-sigh- The angst, and it's just so beautiful. I love it. Thanks for writing. I really can't say how much I love this story, considering that I have a small vocabulary. -__-;;; Love it!! More!
Great story! :)