[Report This]Date: 13/09/05 - 03:53 pm Title: Tom Marvolo Riddle's Tombstone
This is really good, I'm so happy with the 4th chapter...I can't wait to see what else you've got in store.
Author's Response: Its hard to believe that it's been so long since I updated over here. I will try to remedy that soon. Thank you for your review. FSB
[Report This]Date: 13/09/05 - 05:25 am Title: Tom Marvolo Riddle's Tombstone
Lol, I like it. Draco's making me laugh, normally I think he is just a prick. But I like him in this. Just one comment to make, Harry's 17 so her in England he would get his contacts on the NHS like his glasses. It's very annoying but all under 18s and over 60s get their medication, prescription glasses and contacts free. Rest of the population has to pay though.
Author's Response: Hi Mistress Aiofe Black. Thanks for the information. I haven't had a chance to go in and change it yet. (Wish we had such great benefits over her. *sigh*) Thanks for the review. FSB
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 07:02 pm Title: FireEater
Wow, I love it! Please keep going!
Just an idea, I think it would be good to come back to why Harry made the choice to take Draco with him, later in the story. Such an impulsive choice would have a real emotional motivation and I think you set up everything well, so it would be a pity to not come through. What I mean is, Harry could be all introspective for once in his life and wonder why he made the choice, or something like that. Any way, great work!
Author's Response: Hi FangQueen13. Introspective - I like that. Considering that Harry finds out why Draco came to him in the next segment - fair is fair - Draco should be told Harry's side. Thanks for the plot bunny. *G* Thanks for reviewing. FSB
[Report This]Date: 29/08/05 - 06:16 pm Title: Kiss Me
i liked this story. i think that FyrSongBird has a great creative side. keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Hi Virginsky. Thanks - you make me blush. The next segment is awaiting validation. Hope you enjoy that one also. Thanks so much for reviewing. FSB
[Report This]Date: 27/08/05 - 09:14 pm Title: Kiss Me
This chocolate frog holds the a wonderful begining to a storp card! But, oh look you have a double card frog, the second card is the one of I can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response: Hi Rainfall4me. Ooh, I do enjoy chocolate frogs. Thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed the first segment. The next is in validation holding. Hope you like that one also. Draco/Harry are so much fun to write. Thanks again. FSB