[Report This]Date: 17/09/05 - 12:03 am Title: Epilogue
That was wonderful!
I'm glad I got over my aversion to BDSM and read it. Very tastefully done, and heart-wrenching. I do love it when my heart feels like it's been shoved through a wringer, and it felt exactly like that in several places. Very well done.
I suppose I was half expecting this to be PWP, but I'm glad it wasn't. I don't think I can lavish enough praise on this. Fantastic job!
Jen
Author's Response: Thanks, Jen, that's very kind of you. You know, I started this as a PWP, and that's how it's categorized, but I think maybe it's a bit more.
[Report This]Date: 16/09/05 - 04:45 pm Title: Discovery
Any chance of writing something like this from Severus's side? I'd love to know what's in his mind.
Author's Response: There were times when I really wanted to move into his POV for a time, but he is such a convoluted character, I felt it would be over my head. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 13/09/05 - 03:33 am Title: Epilogue
Terrific story. I'm not into slash actually, but this story was reccommended by a friend. It didn't disappoint.
~~~Ellcey
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a try. I'm pleased that people who don't ordinarily like slash are finding something about the story that appeals to them.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 03:21 pm Title: Epilogue
Yes! You get it! "...he could hold the power, or give it up. It was an intoxicating dance..." That, for me, is the beauty of a D/s relationship. So many writers just miss the point and use it as an excuse to bring to characters together without explaining why they would bother. Thanks for sharing, and feel free to write more Snupin if the mood strikes you...
Author's Response: feel free to write more Snupin if the mood strikes you...
lol - they are kind of fun! Thanks for your reviews and your kind words.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 03:13 pm Title: Rebirth
Huh. No answers about Snape's self destructive behavior from last chapter. But maybe there's no need for an explanation. What matters is the two men are talking and acting as equals and partners, at least outside of the bedroom games. Great story, well told, perfect characterization.
Author's Response: Nope - no trips inside Snape's head - lol! Thanks for the kind words.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 02:53 pm Title: Destruction
This story continues to be outstanding. I can think of several reasons why Snape did what he did. Could be he really wanted Remus to stop him, so it was a test of sorts to see how badly he was wanted. Could be Snape is so emotionally messed up the only way he could clear his head was to experience cleansing pain (which sounds insane, but was offered as an explanation to me by a guy who was really into bloodletting). Could be Snape wanted to be punished for something Death Eater related, having nothing to do with Remus. Or could be something I've missed entirely. All I know is, I'm glad I waited until the entire story was posted before I started reading *cackles madly to herself*.
Author's Response: You've pretty much covered my thoughts, particularly the second thing. Except for the DE thing. I look at them being a recent addition to Snape's problems.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 02:37 pm Title: The Plan
Wow! I thought the characterisations were great without dialog, I'm really impressed now that they're talking. I love Snape's comment “You discarded me, Lupin. That doesn’t sound like the actions of an ‘interested’ man.” It sums up what a snide but vulnerable man he is, at least to me. And I like how Remus comes across as concerned and sympathetic, but not whiney, pushy, or clingy. Great job, off to read more...
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 02:05 pm Title: Foundering
Well, well, well, very interesting. I like how Remus forgot about his potion, much like he did in PoA. And that Snape took him to task over it. Interesting how Snape showed up AND SLEPT with the wolf. As much as I am dying to read Snape's POV, I must say it's a tighter, more interesting story knowing nothing but Remus's thoughts. Snape is my favorite mystery and I love how he's coming across in this fic.
Author's Response: Interesting how Snape showed up AND SLEPT with the wolf. I see Snape as showing up in Lupin's room the first time as him grabbing an unexpected opportunity to overcome his fear of werewolves – something he would have to do if he didn’t want to become lunchmeat for Fenrir. He knew, on some level, that Lupin wouldn’t kill him – probably – so was taking advantage. Once over his fear, he found himself returning for other reasons. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 01:34 pm Title: Breaking
Very well done! I am of Remus's school of thought on D/s, and do not personally prefer beatings, bloodletting, and serious pain. I can understand Severus's needs, but like Remus just can't participate. It's amazing how much each character's personality really shines though, in spite of a lack of dialog. I still see Severus as a mystery here, and am racing to the next chapter for more!
Author's Response: I'm with you and Remus. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 01:23 pm Title: Werewolf and Wizard
I'll be honest; werewolf sex squicks me out. I'm glad you kept it in the background. Now, I may be completely wrong here, but I suspect that Severus is *always* afraid during these encounters, it's just that only the werewolf senses can pick it up. There's definately something going on in Snape's head, that he continues to show up despite the fear. Looking for answers (or, heck, more lovely questions) in the next chapter.
Author's Response: My thoughts, when I started writing this, was the reason Snape showed up in Lupin's room in the first place, was to conquer his fear of werewolves. Now that we know that Voldemort is recruiting werewolves, this makes more sense to me than ever. I don't imagine Snape would last long with Fenrir if the werewolf smelled his fear.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 11:31 am Title: Discovery
I have been eagerly waiting the completion of this story before I started reading it. Snegurochka is responsible for my fascination with Snupin, so I read all of it I can find. There's very little Dominant!Lupin, Submissive!Snape out there, but it is absolutely my favorite, when done properly. I also love all of your other stories I've seen, regardless of pairings, so I knew this one would be good, too.
But enough gushing, here's my thoughts so far. Both men are highly in character and the D/s is breathtakingly believable. There seems to be a story behind Snape's behavior that I look forward to seeing unfold in the future chapters. Off to the next...
Author's Response: It's good to see you here, and I hope you enjoy the ride. Thanks for reviewing. (Snegurochka has a lot to answer for, doesn't she?)
[Report This]Date: 09/09/05 - 12:54 am Title: Epilogue
Aww! Great story, I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 09:22 pm Title: Epilogue
I love your story, and I now love Snupin! You've created such an intriguing relationship here. I love the dialogue between the two. It seems very canon to me. I've not seen any other stories with Snape as a submissive, but after reading this I find it more believable than Snape as Dominant. And of course, the sex is completely hot! I checked every day for updates. Please write more!
Author's Response: Another Snupin convert - lol! Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 09:17 pm Title: Epilogue
I love your story, and I now love Snupin! You've created such an intriguing relationship here. I love the dialogue between the two. It seems very canon to me. I've not seen any other stories with Snape as a submissive, but after reading this I find it more believable than Snape as Dominant. And of course, the sex is completely hot! I checked every day for updates. Please write more!
Author's Response: Another Snupin convert - lol! Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 11:48 am Title: Epilogue
You nailed it. Right on the head. I'm definately going to save this (is that okay with you?) and re-read it. The exchange of power, the continual exchange that has little to do with who's tied down and who's doing the tying, is perfectly defined and described. Excellent. I'll be reading more of yours. Stasia
Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews have been very insightful.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 10:43 am Title: Epilogue
Bravo!! Brilliant and very satisfying ending.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 10:04 am Title: Epilogue
I eagerly looked for updates, and devoured each chapter whole. There is something that you caught between them, some balance of power, that is displayed here in a way I haven't seen it done in any other Snupin. I found it enticing and erotic and compelling, all at once. This story is a wonderful accomplishment; bravo, Author!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 09:18 am Title: Epilogue
Ha! Happy Birthday, indeed. What a yummy way to finish this marvelous story. Now I need to go back and read the whole thing again. Kudos on a job well done!
-Rhi
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it - thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 06:31 am Title: Epilogue
Oh, why did it have to end here? Please write more! Or more Snupin, what ever you'd like. When the sixth book came out, so many Snupin just stopped writing it. Maybe you should give a hint to one of your betas as well. :-)))))))
I love the man's nerves in this one and power shifting, now I understand it more.
Author's Response: you should give a hint to one of your betas as well. Oh, I'm sure she'll get back to Snupin eventually. She's just enamored of the Asshat at the moment. I do have another chapter of this that I removed as it didn't really fit anywhere. I might do something with that... Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/05 - 06:16 am Title: Rebirth
I was delighted with this ending and even though I don't know what really happens in these kind of relationships, I was really hoping it would end something like that. Oh, and I see a Snape/stranger action I wanted in the future! I'm just sorry it's over that fast.
Author's Response: Hmmm, a threesome. Possibilities... Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/05 - 01:47 pm Title: Rebirth
*whimpers*
I love that sex scene so much, because it is so much more than just a sex scene. Don't get me wrong - it's very hot and very well-written, but it also serves as such a great metaphor for their relationship overall. Lupin's willingness to give himself like that was clearly a difficult decision, as was Snape's decision to ask for it. It serves as this great representation of the shift in their relationship towards something that could be long-term, but it's done without them having to talk about it for eight chapters. Great job. Oh and also: SQUEE on the Greek Boy reference. Ha. :) ~Lee
Author's Response: ...without them having to talk about it for eight chapters. lol! Snape has always struck me as a man of much action and very few words. Thanks for all your support, babe - and you know what's coming!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/05 - 12:50 pm Title: Rebirth
I read this after midnight last night, but didn't want to give you a rushed, hurried review. It seems that Severus is finally learning that one can only truly submit from a position of power, not from a position of powerlessness. Equality and balance of power is what makes relationships like these strong and longlasting. I'm a little surprised at Remus' reaction to Severus' unwillingness to share him with (*heh*) strange Greek boys. What surprised me about that was that Remus already felt guilty about it, he already knew he wanted an exclusive relationship with Severus. I'd think he'd be glad that Severus felt strong and entitled enough to *ask* for something like that. I'll be saving this story to my computer to read again, if you don't mind. I can't wait for the epilogue. Stasia
Author's Response: I think Lupin's reaction was mainly one of surprise - and a bit of guilt. Can't say more as I don't want to give the Epilogue away... Thank you so much for your reviews. They've been very helpful.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/05 - 10:43 am Title: Rebirth
Had to risk reading this at work, and I have to say, it was so worth it! I am happy with the way this chapter went--wonderfully written as always. You really made me feel all of Lupin's anxiety and of course, I love the ending.
Author's Response: Good lord - you read this at work! Too brave of you - lol. Glad you liked it, and thanks for your help and reviews.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/05 - 10:24 am Title: Rebirth
Oh, MARVELOUS! I love the way you did this and it was completely unexpected. I never would have pictured Lupin relinquishing control like this to Snape, nor Snape managing to be so gentle with him. Beautifully written (and I love the teasing at the end
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you've enjoyed this.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/05 - 04:15 am Title: Rebirth
:D beautifully orchestrated. It's good that Snape was assured that their relationship would be worth something to the both of them. By Lupin letting Snape take the Dom position, he established a trust and security in Snape that had been lacking; pivotal to any equal yet dual-role relationship, and you've captured it wonderfully!
Author's Response: Thank you - I was a bit worried about that.