[Report This]Date: 01/12/05 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter One: Homecoming
Excellent. Plausible, and not that crass, smutty stuff.
Author's Response: I always saw Snape as poor as a church mouse and was glad to see my point of view redeemed. Thanks for also seeing my version as plausible.
Amorette
[Report This]Date: 22/10/05 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Two: Leaving Taking
Very nice. Your characterizations of both Snape and Malfoy were very well done, I thought. I liked the tea with Slughorn scene particularly-- the amusing stories Lucius and Slughorn told, and Severus knowing no amusing stories so listening quietly. I thought that spoke volumes to Snape's character.
Quite enjoyable.
Jen
Author's Response: Thank you. The scene existed in an earlier version, written pre-HBP, and when Slughorn came into existence, he fitted into it perfectly! Thanks for taking the time to review.
Amorette