Wow.
I laughed through the whole thing, and then cried at the end. *wipes tear* SO perfect!
Great job, the characters (AU though they might be)are very vivid. Brilliant fic!
You made me cry! Noone makes me cry! Such a beautiful and funny story; well done.
NO! you killed him, and when he was finally happy! amazing fic, you broke my delicate little heart!
i dont know how many times ive read this fic now, but it gets to me every time! fabulous writing, brilliant plot, tear jerking end though, lol. utterly devine piece of writing.
Wow, how sad.. Never thought of fred and george with severus though... It worked!
This was great. The ending was sad, which is refreshing from all of those happy endings that everybody always gives. (myself included). I love how Fred and George can share everything- even Severus. For me, a rather anti-people person, I seriously doubt I could ever share like that without jealousy. I think that is one of my favourite parts of the twins, and you portrayed that so wonderfully.
awww that was stangely beautiful, vengance is sweet
My God!! So sad! So lovely but the end - so sad! God it almost physically hurts... God........ I um... It is very well written. I ...Good story..Sorry I'm still trying to recover from reading it. God - LIFE! "sigh"
You ruined the ending. *falls over crying*... But it was still good!
Amazing story. Sad at the end, but still a bit hopefuul in an odd way.
*making strange sounds* THIS REALLY IMPRESSED ME!!! By Merlin...
I can't believe Voldemort killed him. I actually cried. Poor twins. It's a beautiful story.
fantastic! very clever, well written and sensual. thankyou.
Wonderfully done. Bitter and sad, yet beautiful at the same time.
beautiful. Funny, sweet, and completely beautiful.
Another one of Lychee's stories. And it's beautiful. I love Severus in this one. I would do exactly the same thing to make him smile.
Beautifully done. Snape was almost perfectly written, not a trace of OOC to be found. The pairing is something I'd never thought of and it was beautiful. The ending was wonderful as well. Very nice.