That is a very well written story, I think. Everyone has different experiences with God, but maybe it would not be so hard, if Susan was not as much religious. On the other hand, if one accepts being queer and finds a way to arrange it with what one thinks God is saying, it is a huge source of strength. The way she prayed and how the praying changes was very authentically. You mention that this is your first femslash story. Are you queer? I do not mean to be nosy, but it is different, if you have lived through something like this or if you 'only' have read books about it. I also liked the fact that Megan didn't react like in an ordinary love story! So, again, very good story! Yours, Meta
incredible story, I really liked it!