[Report This]Date: 14/10/07 - 01:57 am Title: One Shot
Interesting pairing. Clever. I love Bellatrix stuff.
[Report This]Date: 07/10/07 - 08:28 am Title: One Shot
Wow, that was awesome. I really liked the intense atmosphere, it was very well written. Bella/Rita is a surprisingly fitting pairing.
[Report This]Date: 28/07/06 - 10:48 pm Title: One Shot
That was brilliant, so dark and erotic. That end line, "she likes it" was absoultly perfect
[Report This]Date: 28/07/06 - 10:48 pm Title: One Shot
That was brilliant, so dark and erotic. That end line, "she likes it" was absoultly perfect
[Report This]Date: 02/06/06 - 07:45 pm Title: One Shot
Make it bigger. There's an amazing premise here and it's hot as hell but it doesn't seem complete. I love the asphyxiation and the loss of happiness making it more dark, but it needs just a little more. Maybe you don't think so and will never change it, which is cool, it's yours, that's just my two cents.
[Report This]Date: 07/03/06 - 10:01 am Title: One Shot
Most impressive. I like th twist that there is only the feelings, o happiness, no love, just the lust and the harsh words anf the blood and the quill. Nicely written.