[Report This]Date: 10/09/09 - 03:08 am Title: The Beginning
i hope you can update soon its really good and i want to know more, and i want to know how sev will fix it
[Report This]Date: 20/07/06 - 08:19 pm Title: The Beginning
Great story. I think the characterization is strong, and the mystery of the "deformity" is really intriguing. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 18/07/06 - 04:12 pm Title: The Beginning
I'e read the firt chapter several times and keep coming back in hopes of an update. Hope you can wrestle real life into submission and work on this sometime soon. Oh...and do you have any other fic out there on different sites? I'd love to check it out if you do. Thanks for the read.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/06 - 07:55 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh, that was amazing. Such wonderful writing and an intreaging mystery. I would love to read more about this.
[Report This]Date: 21/05/06 - 01:36 pm Title: The Beginning
I like this story very much! I like twisting the usual dynamic of Severus being the insecure one and Harry being the "seducer". I cant wait until you update, hint hint.
[Report This]Date: 11/05/06 - 12:03 am Title: The Beginning
Oh, that's just cruel, leaving it like that. “Nobody except a St. Mungo’s specialist, and he’s assured me it’s irreversible except if – oh damnit all.” That's just too great of a tease. And then you just left things so unfinished at the end.... I think you will have to write a sequel or face the possibility of being lynched most painfully.
I'd be glad to beta even, if you like, and need someone to do it. Just PLEASE continue this story.
Author's Response: It's going to be continued - it's just rather slow going due to the demon of Real Life. It's not the end.
[Report This]Date: 17/03/06 - 06:48 pm Title: The Beginning
I am very intrigued by the first chapter. I am a sucker for Snarry and this seems like an interesting beginning. :) I cannot wait to see where this story goes next. Great job and update soon!
[Report This]Date: 15/03/06 - 04:43 pm Title: The Beginning
I'm happy to be the first to review this story. I am intrigued and look forward to more. Cheers, Rosemont.