Awwwww. This was really good; I like the prose style (am a sucker for minimalistic but catching phrases) and the fact that you cut it into parts instead of having it as one great soup of a story. Very well done.
Woah! Now THAT'S a storyline! I hope you continue this, and soon!
Author's Response: Whoops, I'm sorry! I just forgot to click "complete." :( Glad you like it, though.