hi! just thought maybe i'd see if you had written any snupin yourself. i liked this very much. i liked how you have snape watching him - i've always seen snape like that, too. i see in a review response you mentioned sequels, so i'll have to see if i can find those.
This was a beautiful story. I am the kind of slash-reader who only reads "C" rated stuff, I despise smut/porn or anything like it. So stories like this, that are just about what goes on in their minds, is perfect for me. I loved it. I can't wait to read the sequel! I only hope you keep it as "C" rated as this one...please?
Oh bummer! The angst the unrequitted love. Oh it is rather depressing isnt it? I hope one of them will make a first move. All this suffering could be put to a much needed end.
Author's Response: I'm actually working on a sequel or continuation of this piece. It'll actually have some dialogue! I'm hoping to have it finished by the time Sychophant Hex merges their archives. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to post a comment.
Excellent fic!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was my first attempt at a story like this. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.
This was a beautifully-crafted and sensitively-written exploration of the Snupin pairing. Unlike many other slash readers, I won't read stories that contain smut/detailed descriptions of overt sexual acts. Instead, I find stories that have more "mild" scenes far sexier, because they are seductive and leave more to the imagination - but, hey, that's just me. I'd love to read a sequel so this story gets some resolution, and I believe it could be done beautifully without degenerating into outright porn - you need not be drawn into that genre to write good slash! In any case, I loved this story - well done!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed. This was my very first venture into the Snape/Lupin pairing. (Or any other male/male pairing.) I find I am quite fascinated by the idea of Snape and Lupin together. They have such a history, after all. I have actually written a sequel, and am also working on a third installment. The sequel is called "Listening," and the third part is called, "Touching." I haven't posted because I'm waiting for the Sychophant web site to merge all their archives. I think the story will get more exposure on a combined web site than it will here on Eros & Sappho. I may even re-post "Watching" as a part of a "Trilogy of the Senses." Boy...have I rambled! Sorry about that. I'm glad you liked the story. I truly enjoyed writing it. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to post a comment...and read this monumental and rambling response.
How lovely! I adore the Snupin pairing, and this sums up their relationship perfectly! I, too, would love some resolution to this (that's the romantic in me, I suppose) but it does stand as a complete story now. *whispers* But don't you want to see them happy? Just a little? *nudge*
Author's Response: Since this was my first attempt at a Snupin, I thought I should keep it clean. Now that I've gotten my feet wet, so to speak, I may move on to a more involved relationship. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment. It is much appreciated.
i absolutely fell in love with this story! it is so sad, intimate, and yet hopeful all at once. i think you did a great job on this, keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This is my first attempt at a Severus/Remus story, so feedback means a lot. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to post a comment.
*weeps* Oh the angst! Y'know, this is perfect as it stands, but the hopeless romantic in me would love a sequel. There doesn't even have to be smut/sex in it (although, y'know we slash lovers LOVE that stuff), but just... can't they get together??? *wails*
Author's Response: Wow...I'm so glad you liked it. This is my first try at a Snupin fic, so I thought I'd keep it (sort of) clean. I am absolutely fascinated by the pairing, though I'm a HG/SS shippier at heart. Perhaps at some point I'll get up the nerve to actually have them speaking to each other...after that, who knows? Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.
I thinking I just felt my heart break from this story. So beautiful and sad... and lovely. Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad you appreciate it. This is my first foray into this pairing, but I am quite fascinated by it. Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.