[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Still
03-23-2007 23:48 Rated 10
Absolutely brilliant! You DO NOT disappoint! You've written Draco and Harry's first kiss perfectly. I am now an official, card-carrying member of the Shanfawn16 fanclub. After reading this chapter, I realized just how emotionally attached I have become to your Draco. I was very annoyed with Harry for being such an idiot, but if Draco can forgive him, I suppose it's the least I can do as well.
Author's Response: Yes! That's what I need! Actual cards that I can hand out to people! ;)
Thanks for another lovely review! I happen to be quite fond of my Draco, as well. What can I say, I love the boys! :)
Reader's Response:
You might want to look into the card idea; I'm sure your other loyal reviewers would each love one as well! This story is so brilliant (I might have mentioned that once or twice?) that I sometimes get annoyed that more people don't leave you rave reviews. I guess what we lack in quantity, the five or six of us loyal reviewers make up for in quality! And incase you were wondering, there was another "incident" at work today after receipt of my Owl post.
Author's Response: *smile* Yay! I love enthusiasm in the workplace! I love it even more when it's about my fic and not work! :) I hope you keep enjoying it just as much! It means so much to me that you and my other loyal reviewers keep letting me know. Just so you know, you've made my night! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Still
03-23-2007 20:50 Rated 10
UGGGGH!!!!! SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD!!!! PLEASE SAY THERE'S MORE ON THE WAY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Author's Response: Of course! The next chapter, as well as an outtake, are both already in the queue! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Stay tuned! Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Still
03-23-2007 20:33 Rated 10
Heart-wrenchingly sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was about time for my boys to get a little something for all their troubles! Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Still
03-23-2007 19:02 Rated 10
Lovely! I figured that's what Harry was doing, trying to gain some experience. Glad to see they're working things out. Update again soon! How many chappies did you say this story might have? 30-something? Just curious.
Author's Response: The story has 33 chapters total, with two outtakes currently written. I'll be queuing the first outtake today. I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Stay tuned! Thanks for another wonderful review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Still
03-23-2007 17:39 Rated 10
"He had gone from complete and total rage and justifiable hurt to fondness and warm Hufflepuffy goodness in less than ten minutes."
I know i said it before, but i love the idea of him having fluffy thoughts!
Nice bit about his background too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just wanted to throw a little bit in about Draco's childhood. He may have changed a lot, but he's still Draco! Thanks for coming back for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Still
03-23-2007 17:27 Rated 10
i kind of suspected something like that would happen, but you made it seem really believeable. and i loved the lesson on being Still. this was another amazing chapter, fantastic job! ~katie
Author's Response: Thanks! I think this was my favorite chapter of the whole story. Thanks for coming back to read and review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Experimentation
03-22-2007 14:02 Rated 10
Hmmmm....I promise not to throw stuff at you, but I must say I`m a bit disappointed... :-( I seriously hope Harry is just trying to get some experience to dazzle Draco with, but It`s kind of a wrong way to do it... Poor Draco!! *sniffs* Looking forward to the next chappies! Kiss and make up!!! ;-)
Author's Response: Remember... Harry doesn't always think everything through...
But yes, I did feel a bit of saddness about poor Draco, but I've always promised that the boys would end up together!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Experimentation
03-22-2007 07:24 Rated 10
Next chapter??? Such a cliff hanger!!!!!!! Sooooo good though!!!! ^_^
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for leaving a review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Experimentation
03-22-2007 00:30 Rated 10
Excellent plot twist! I have too much faith in you to take that scene at face value. I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve! You've written this chapter with your usual finesse. It was great to see Draco and Hermione becoming friends; it added more depth to Draco's character and fleshed out Hermione's a bit more. I'll be keeping an eye out for my Owl post for the next chapter. Hopefully, it will show up when there aren't too many of my co-workers about. I'm still getting teased!
Author's Response: Hey... being teased builds character. That's my story, and I'm sticking to it! The next chapter is in the queue, and they've been averaging every 2 days or so, so hopefully it'll be up soon. I'm glad you're liking the interactions! There's some twists coming up! Thanks for always taking the time to review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Experimentation
03-21-2007 18:07 Rated 10
And when will said chapter be posted???? You're killing me here!
Seriously, update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry! Next chapter is already in the queue! :) Thanks for sticking with me! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Experimentation
03-21-2007 17:13 Rated 10
Hmmm...is Harry geting a new type of 'lesson' from George?
Author's Response: Well, the twins always did like to share information with Harry... Hang in there, it'll all be explained! Promise! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Experimentation
03-21-2007 16:51 Rated 10
OMG you are totally breaking my heart here! whats going on? please please please update soon! i love it!
Author's Response: Sorry!!! I promise, it'll all be okay! Next chapter is already in the queue! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Understanding
03-20-2007 20:26 Rated 10
I know that I always sing your praises, but please don't let that detract from this review. I think that this chapter is one of, if not the best, that you've written so far. You handled the "caught with your pants down" scene (poor Draco!!) perfectly. So many other authors would have used the situation to jump right to the sex. I loved the way you used the "getting drunk" scene to push the boundaries of their relationship a little without getting remotely physical. The evolution of Draco as a person is very evident in this chapter as well. Although he couldn't stop himself from falling back to past behaviour, he has grown up enough to know immediately that he was in the wrong and appologize. Thank you for this absolutely brilliant chapter!
Author's Response: Wow! That might possibly be one of the best reviews I've ever gotten! Thank you so much! *blush* I'm so glad that you like the story and that it continues to live up to your expectations. Thank you so much for continuing to read and review my fics! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Understanding
03-19-2007 22:39
"This seemed to be just one more example of how fate was really trying to screw with him."
lol, poor boy, your realy doing a number on him arn't you?
Author's Response: After everything he's done, he deserves it... just a little! But, don't worry, things always have a way of working out! Thanks for always coming back to review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Understanding
03-19-2007 17:30 Rated 10
Yay, updates! Thank you! Can't wait for more - update again soon.
So, is Harry soon going to get a physical demonstration of what it's like to kiss another bloke? ;))
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue! And, Harry's going to get something, don't worry! Thanks for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Exposure
03-17-2007 03:41 Rated 10
...
cliffie!
*re-calls local pick fork mob*
alright you lot, back to work,!
==
hehe, still, great story so far. im glad i came to check SH myself, owl posts arnt working for me atm for some reason!
Author's Response: Well then, I'm glad you came and checked too... even if you've set the local pitch fork mob after me again! The next chappie is in the queue, and they've been really quick lately! Keep checking back! Thanks for the review! :)
Reader's Response: NP, i never thought i would like hp/dm fic, but your just a wonderful author.
p.s. my pitchfork mob gets a lot of work...i send them after sanata every year to make sure i get the right toys!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Exposure
03-16-2007 19:55 Rated 10
AWESOME! OMG, i can't wait to see where this is going! love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter will make it through the queue in short order! Stay tuned, it's going to be a bumpy ride! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Exposure
03-16-2007 19:12 Rated 10
What a cliffhanger!! Gah!!!! Please say there wil be another chapter soon?? I love this story!!!!!
Author's Response: The next chappie is already in the queue! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Exposure
03-16-2007 18:33 Rated 10
Oh, my! Poor Draco! I can't imagine things getting worse than THAT! Tell me it only gets better from here ;)
Author's Response: Fear not! The tide will begin to turn... Stay tuned! Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Exposure
03-16-2007 17:53 Rated 10 *laughing out loud* That was brilliant! Can`t wait to find out where this goes ;-) Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it. I giggled quite a bit as I wrote this one. The next chappie is in the queue! Thanks for reviewing, as always! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Urges
03-16-2007 14:15 Rated 10
Harry took that well. Perhaps he was hiding something?
Author's Response: Always a possibility... You'll just have to keep reading to find out! :) More is on the way! Thanks for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Urges
03-15-2007 19:31 Rated 10
Thank-you for an excellent (and humorous!) chapter. Poor Draco! I was actually embarrassed for him. That just proves your skill as a writer; Draco seems so real that you can empathize with him. I can only imagine what you'll subject him to in future chapters. I'll be keeping a close eye out for my next Owl post!
Author's Response: I'm afraid there's a bit more embarrassment in store for our Draco before he can reap the benefits... Stay tuned! The next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for continuing to come back for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Urges
03-15-2007 05:14
hehe! handled very well! I'm glad this chapter came now and not earlier in the story. it was all ready!
(hehe, handled! came! Oh good grief, my immature thoughts betray me)
Author's Response: LOL. If you liked this chapter... just wait for the next! There'll be more to 'handle' then!
Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Urges
03-15-2007 00:46
"Draco shuddered at the extremely naughty images that quickly ran through his head at Harry's statement."
giggle
poor draco, all 'dressed up' and no place to go...
Author's Response: But wait... it gets much worse for 'poor Draco' before it gets better! Thanks for coming back to review! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Urges
03-14-2007 23:48 Rated 10
Yay, updates! I like how you're developing things slowly -- makes the relationship more believable, I think. Can't wait to read more. Update again soon!
Author's Response: The fun is just beginning! Thanks for sticking around and coming back to review! :)