[Report This]Date: 13/05/07 - 03:12 am Title: Thirteen Months
Oh, this was beautiful. Just lovely. Thanks so much for posting.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:40 pm Title: Thirteen Months
03-01-2007 04:42 Rated 8
Even though you told me about this story, long time ago, and I read it, I had to give you some props when I jumped on and saw this story over here!
*hugs*
~Isa
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:39 pm Title: Thirteen Months
02-22-2007 19:51 Rated 8
A very unusual story but very satisfying They were both in character although this is AU thank you
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:39 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 22:46 Rated 10
I'd hate to deprive you of the chance to perform the happy dance -
a lovely story :)
Author's Response: It's actually the *feedback* dance. The happy dance is something entirely different involving fire batons. :D Thanks, mizangua.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:38 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 11:21 Rated 10
Breathtaking
Author's Response: Thank you, Anathema. (Great name!) :D
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:38 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 08:11 Rated 10
Absolutely beautiful. The imagery and the longing...just stunningly beautiful. Thank you.
Author's Response: What a lovely compliment, Maria. You've brightened my day in a huge way. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:37 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 04:11
I really liked it, but I think it was missing a little bit of tension between the two of them. Like I didn't get the feeling of buildup, like there was some mellow companionship and then all the sudden, they are all over each other. Which is okay, but...I just love stories with a bit of tension. ;-) Well done otherwise and I like the quotes on the months.
Author's Response: Thanks, Preferia. I did try to get the build-up in it, but it's a bit subtle and Lupin would insist on being passive-aggressive. I'm glad you liked it anyway.
Reader's Response: Dear Remus? Passive aggressive? No way! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:36 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 01:48 Rated 10
It's that time of year when we pour over seed catalogues and plan for the spring planting. Your story brought those thoughts to mind immediately.
Very nicely written. I especially liked "Alone instead of solitary." You captured Severus' movement from enjoying his isolation to his discontent with his situation. Remus was subtle and relentless even in his absence.
I think I enjoyed your story especially since I have been following RaeWhit's The Sensible Garden. The two stories complement each other nicely.
I am looking forward to reading more of your writing and must do a check of them after this review.
Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely, thoughtful review, fire wall. It brought a huge smile to my face. I haven't read The Sensible Garden; I'll have to look for it. (I hope you do look up more of my writing and I hope it's to your taste.) :)
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:36 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 00:36 Rated 9
excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:35 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-23-2007 00:08 Rated 7
nice
well thought out
I did not know plants said those things
Author's Response: Thanks, Tash. Plant language is kind of an interesting thing. :)
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 07:34 pm Title: Thirteen Months
01-22-2007 22:51 Rated 9
Stylishly written and I love the monthly headers. *clicks Favourite*
Author's Response: Favorite, yay! Thanks so much, Faraday.