Reviewer: starstruck86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/09 - 04:03 pm Title: Their First Christmas, and Their Last

Oh, God. This fic +  me + half a bottle of wine = wibbling wreck. (I would have been that without the added wine though, I promise).

Very beautiful addition to the other two. Everything, from Severus recalling his childhood devastation to telling Remus to return to his wife and unborn child at the end was just perfect. It fits so neatly into the canon, too.

Something that really made me smile was Remus' comment about not poking the bear -a phrase I can well imagine that being so very near the truth!

*sniffle* Really beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: i'm so glad you liked it, though i'm sorry for the wibbling wreck part. i was very happy that i was able to weave it in around the edges of canon, even though that made it so sad. thanks so much for this lovely review. :D