Wonderful. I really loved it. :)
This is beautiful! I hope you continue.
Very, very nice! Good work!
a little editing could do you good: "a damn coward who hides away in his room and think that one day he'll lose yourself in your self or your books and never have to face anyone again" Don't change subjects mid-sentence! For heaven's sake! Grammar is just as important as subject matter!
I don't get it. The ratings system on this website is seriously screwed up. There is nothing in this fic to merit an R rating. Or is implied slash alone enough for R? So your fic is good, but this is ridiculous.
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.