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Reviewer: Clakkers Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/08 - 04:20 pm Title: Aged Fourteen

YOU ARE SICK, TWISTED AND DERANGED. Incest for god's sake, is absolutoly DISGUSTING. Not something sexy or cool or clever. It's as bad as rape and sexual abuse. It's perverse and you repulse me. You seem to be a talanted writer but i suggest you use that talent for decent writing, not this filth.

Reviewer: Darker Side Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/06 - 10:31 pm Title: Aged Fourteen

I'm not usually one for incest. Actually this is the first one I've read and it was fucking fantastic. Bella's my girl. I love nearly every story with her in it. Nearly, I say. This was good stuff. The way you painted the picture of Narcissa going down the hallway afraid of the storm was awesome. Not to mention Bella's sorrow in needing to hear/know that she's loved, which made the story all the more sweeter. You should defintely write more.

Reviewer: Cammy_Indigo Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 27/04/06 - 07:32 am Title: Aged Fourteen

wow, that is absolutly fantastic, please, please, please write more!!

Reviewer: emerald_sparrow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/01/06 - 05:51 pm Title: Aged Fourteen

MORE! I've been searching everywhere for GOOD Blackcest... and this was better than good. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I beg of you!

Reviewer: Jamieson Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 25/10/05 - 11:55 am Title: Aged Fourteen

Very nice - I'm not per se an incest fan, but I really enjoyed it. A few annoying typos don't invalidate a very textural writing style.

Reviewer: Starstuckfanatsy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 13/03/05 - 10:31 pm Title: Aged Fourteen

well..wat can i say..i like..a lot..

Reviewer: Bitter Vanity Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 21/12/04 - 01:54 am Title: Aged Fourteen

^____^ Well written, I think it's rather sweet. :)

Reviewer: Iona Anonymous star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/04 - 05:43 pm Title: Aged Fourteen

As strange as the idea of bedding my own sister is to me, I can well believe things might be rather different in the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black. Having read OotP, I'd say your Bellatrix is quite in character, if somewhat precocious.

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