YOU ARE SICK, TWISTED AND DERANGED. Incest for god's sake, is absolutoly DISGUSTING. Not something sexy or cool or clever. It's as bad as rape and sexual abuse. It's perverse and you repulse me. You seem to be a talanted writer but i suggest you use that talent for decent writing, not this filth.
I'm not usually one for incest. Actually this is the first one I've read and it was fucking fantastic. Bella's my girl. I love nearly every story with her in it. Nearly, I say. This was good stuff. The way you painted the picture of Narcissa going down the hallway afraid of the storm was awesome. Not to mention Bella's sorrow in needing to hear/know that she's loved, which made the story all the more sweeter. You should defintely write more.
wow, that is absolutly fantastic, please, please, please write more!!
MORE! I've been searching everywhere for GOOD Blackcest... and this was better than good. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I beg of you!
Very nice - I'm not per se an incest fan, but I really enjoyed it. A few annoying typos don't invalidate a very textural writing style.
well..wat can i say..i like..a lot..
^____^ Well written, I think it's rather sweet. :)
As strange as the idea of bedding my own sister is to me, I can well believe things might be rather different in the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black. Having read OotP, I'd say your Bellatrix is quite in character, if somewhat precocious.